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plot: Using the sword to take over the world. Many battles and deaths over the one special sword called Excalibur and they go through many jouneys to find the sword and put it in the hands of good. Alfred Kropp and his Uncle take a sword from Uncle Farrell's boss after a man offered them one million dollars. Once they gave him the sword they find out that the sword is really Excalibur and that the man that they gave it to is EVIL! And he killed Uncle Farell
Omg I know right how will Alfred save the world he is just a softmore. But Alfred meets a modern time knight named Bennacio and they go through many countries on the path to find excalibur and take it away from the hands of evil. On the way they run through many different situations like bennacio getting stabbed by evil knights. Knights chasing them on motorcycles and getting ambushed by secret agents. They have to find a way to stop him.
conflict: A young boy named Alfred Kropp lived with his mom until she died due to cancer. He had no where to live because his father moved away before he was born. So he has to live in many different foster homes until his uncle named Uncle Farrell finds him and decides to take him to live with him. He goes to a new school and many kids make fun of him because of his unordinary size. Alfred tries many different activities to do because all he does is sit in his room and listen to music so he tries to get his liscense,but he fails the test many times. But the fourth time he final got his liscnese. He also tried out for the football team but he didnt do very well. Alfred and his uncle are not as wealthy as the average person because his uncle just works as a security guard at this building called Samson Towers.
One day Uncle Farrell meets a man named Author Myers that is offering one million dollars to steal a sword in Samson Towers. So Uncle Farrell agrees to take the sword, but he decides to make Alfred help him take it or he will send him back to foster care. So Alfred helped him even though he has a bad feeling about it. When he gets it three guys try to stop him but the sword gave Alfred some type of strength and he defeats all three of them and leaves with his uncle from Samson Towers.
Mr. Myers then meets them at their apartment and when Alfred gives him the sword. Then Mr. Myers takes it and stabs Uncle Farrell's in the chest. Then Mr. Samson comes to their house and informs Alfred that he gave the sword to an evil knight and that he going to use it to rule the world. No one can stop him because the sword is actually Excalibur an sword told in many old stories and myths and nothing on Earth can defeat it. Then Alfred met a modern time knight and they went on a journey to get the sword and put it in the hands of the good. People dieing, wars staring, people crying,the world ending, and Excalibur is in the hands of evil, how will they save the world.
plot: Using the sword to take over the world. Many battles and deaths over the one special sword called Excalibur and they go through many jouneys to find the sword and put it in the hands of good. Alfred Kropp and his Uncle take a sword from Uncle Farrell's boss after a man offered them one million dollars. Once they gave him the sword they find out that the sword is really Excalibur and that the man that they gave it to is EVIL! And he killed Uncle Farell
Omg I know right how will Alfred save the world he is just a softmore. But Alfred meets a modern time knight named Bennacio and they go through many countries on the path to find excalibur and take it away from the hands of evil. On the way they run through many different situations like bennacio getting stabbed by evil knights. Knights chasing them on motorcycles and getting ambushed by secret agents. They have to find a way to stop him.
conflict: A young boy named Alfred Kropp lived with his mom until she died due to cancer. He had no where to live because his father moved away before he was born. So he has to live in many different foster homes until his uncle named Uncle Farrell finds him and decides to take him to live with him. He goes to a new school and many kids make fun of him because of his unordinary size. Alfred tries many different activities to do because all he does is sit in his room and listen to music so he tries to get his liscense,but he fails the test many times. But the fourth time he final got his liscnese. He also tried out for the football team but he didnt do very well. Alfred and his uncle are not as wealthy as the average person because his uncle just works as a security guard at this building called Samson Towers.
One day Uncle Farrell meets a man named Author Myers that is offering one million dollars to steal a sword in Samson Towers. So Uncle Farrell agrees to take the sword, but he decides to make Alfred help him take it or he will send him back to foster care. So Alfred helped him even though he has a bad feeling about it. When he gets it three guys try to stop him but the sword gave Alfred some type of strength and he defeats all three of them and leaves with his uncle from Samson Towers.
Mr. Myers then meets them at their apartment and when Alfred gives him the sword. Then Mr. Myers takes it and stabs Uncle Farrell's in the chest. Then Mr. Samson comes to their house and informs Alfred that he gave the sword to an evil knight and that he going to use it to rule the world. No one can stop him because the sword is actually Excalibur an sword told in many old stories and myths and nothing on Earth can defeat it. Then Alfred met a modern time knight and they went on a journey to get the sword and put it in the hands of the good. People dieing, wars staring, people crying,the world ending, and Excalibur is in the hands of evil, how will they save the world.